I am from the smell of the salt air
From palm trees, and the fruits of the islands
With their soft, warm touch, and their cool sweet tastes
That entices all men to adventure.
I am from the long deep, depths of the sea, from the cold blue
From the sparkling azure, to the glistening green that excited the
worthiest adventurers, brigands, smugglers and captains.
I am from the earth
From the spicy red clay, to the hard desert cement
To the rolling greens, and rolling hills, to the smoky pines
And the sweet smell of the grass beneath my feet.
I am from the long road trips with multiple stops
From the long hours of boredom on the way to the great beyond.
To the “are we there yets” to the “I’m tireds” always making it to our destinations
I am from the long dusty nights; The crisp chill of the cold dry air hitting my face
From the dew on the ground, to the walk to the school bus
All seemed right with the world.
Gabe, you have some really beautiful language in this poem! Nice word choices (azure, etc). Good implementation of some dialgoue: "Are we there yets." I'd love to see another stanza or twot hat gives me even more life experiences from your view, but overall, excellent!
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